Really great job at portraying the mood. My only criticism was that it could have used a little bit more dynamically, but maybe that would have ended up taking away from it.
Really great job at portraying the mood. My only criticism was that it could have used a little bit more dynamically, but maybe that would have ended up taking away from it.
Sounds like good advice to me! Thanks for listening :D
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I liked the song.
Actually I liked the high pitched one better. It wasn't so depressing. Anyways I really liked the guitar part, and the melody really went well with it.
P.S Get over the girl. You're not helping anyone by continuing to long after someone who doesn't want you. There are plenty of fish in the sea, so they say.
Thanks for the review lonnan. . It's just that after her, I never really met anyone else that didn't turn out to be a complete disaster. I know I must move on and you are right. There are plenty of fish in the sea. It's just that either I'm not really good at catching them or my bait is not so good :-(
Oh and yeah the high pitched version was funnier.
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